This is really really sweet!!!!!! how adorible!!!!!! i love it... 5/5 soooo good, i love the flow.. happy and sad... good thing too.. and i understand.. about the not always there thing.. perhaps yyou should read " my boyfriends brother"... its a bit explicit but its because he didnt have time for me... and then i found out why....
~Marina~

Oo, a contradictory poem.
But you pulled it off well, the reader can symphathise (sp?) with the situation.
Bouts of being happy and sad in a relationship are completely normal.. unfortunately..
But excellent poem, nice rhythm
5/5
*Gem*

I really liked this, the way you swapped in each stanza, I thought that made you get your point across well.
I liked the flow and I thought it ended very well.

I thought that was so good it ended fantastic well done

Omg i loved this poem i really love the way uve written it! also i can relate u!! it was a very touching poem. well done xx

Hey thats beautiful poem , such nice tribute to one you love .Great going :)

Great job on this. Memories are nice to have. This is beautiful yet sad.

He makes me so happy
Beautiful memories he gave me
Ones I'll always treasure
For now through eternity

This stanza touched my heart.
Take Care Cindy

This was excellent. it was great to see how you set it out. how it was amazingly perfect.

5/5 David

Do you know any relation without tides like these? I dont think so. We all have relations in which there are happy moments and reasons to breakdown. Just keep flowing dear, life has so much to offer.

beautiful poem once again

all the best and take care

And u said you weren't in any way a poet, i think not! you are a wonderful writter and use the perfect words for your pieces, again well done and great job xox lithium.

Great poem. I like the change between sad and happy.

I loved this poem.

"He makes me so sad
He' always so busy
I always knew that about him
He can't always be there for me"
^^this stanza didn't make much sense to me. Maybe because it had some mistakes or missing words. It flowed very nice though. 4/5

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