Admission

*This one kinda sucks to me because it doesn't flow the way i wanted it to and its kinda choppy, but critique as you like, constructive or not!!*

Shall I compare our relationship to a sunny day?
I would, but you know that clouds get in the way.
Your problems rain on our parade and we just ain't the same
I've been feeling that some things really need to change
I know you're doing the best you can
But you don't have to do the things you do to be a man.
You can't keep your insecurities from me
How can you hide what I'm meant to see?
I know your trying to do the best for me,
But what you really need to do is what's best for "we"
And I know you're gonna argue and disagree.
All of your excessive gifts for me aren't necessary
When we argue and disagree.
You don't have to buy your way into my heart.
For you...admission is free.