by DaNgErOuS EnTiCeMeNt Apr 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
There's a constant struggle within me that pulls me to and fro |
by Mommy And Me
This was a good poem. i injoyed reading it. but i think some of your lines should have been cut down a little bit so the flow would have been easier to follow. try and keep your lines around the same length through out the poem. it is both easier on the eyes and helps the reader get a clear image of the feeling behind the poem. |