This is excellent... extremely well written.. i love it!!!!!!! 5/5 i love it! amaizeing flow! and really really good ryme... nice format, i like that part alot...
-Marina.

I love it! It is fantastic and is written very well! 5/5!

Again... cant stop thinking about this poem.. its.. perfect.. again 5/5 i absolytly love it.. well done.. DO NOT STOP WRITTING!