Comments : Weakness

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I can hardly even speak.
    I feel like it would sound better without the 'even .' The poem can take some editing, but overall, it was well written .

    You taught me how to hate,
    never how to love.
    How was I supposed to grow,
    without ever getting hugs??

    I used to ask myself that question (: I was always afraid of affection because hugs were a foreign gesture . People would hug each other & I`d just stand ther elike "What are they doing ?" This poem, I really liked it . It`s a message of staying strong, but it`s so sad all the same .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I dont really like this poem. its kind of weird. but 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Awww wow this is sad, but greatly written. i really like what you wrote about. it's great! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    Damn...i dont know if i can say that but thats the first word that comes to my mind, and i just feel bad, terrible, and just selfish cuz im not there helping you even though i cant really do anything and i just feel like im not trying, all im doing is commenting your poems, but that doesnt make your life any better its just there! First off 5/5 secondly i love this poem and i think it has really good flow n rhymes, girl just keep writting cuz that always helps me through my problems, but i know you'll get though this!

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    You taught me how to hate,
    never how to love.
    How was I supposed to grow,
    without ever getting hugs??

    my dear i do not know why these poems realy touched my heart . it was sad but i loved that stanza most. you done great job takecare 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    This is so sad. You have a great skill of being able to take people who may not be able to relate, and let them in on your feelings and give them an understanding they wouldn't normally have without the experience, if that makes any sense. I really like this one.
    DnB