by Alissa Apr 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
She lays there alone, |
Wow! I loved this poem. Truely loved it, I think it is one of my favorites. In reality thats the way everyone should view something that has ended. Where they have gained something not lost it. You did an amaizng job!!! Wow! Keep up the amazing work! Never stop writing! |
by Michelle18
Wow! i love this poem alot!....very well written and i enjoyed reading it..... |
That was great i relate real well it was touching and you can feel the sadness |
by Impulse
Very well written =)... I'm genuinely touched by that poem and kind of can relate to it from experience =)... it is right... you learn what love is, wisdom... all that stuff... Bravo =) |
by Corruption
This is good i see you havent lost your touch on writing good job it is cool how you compare things to other things good job |