by Goran Rahim
Nice poem |
by Sweet lig
Ohh very touching and heart felt... it made me feel sad. i like the last line,,,, ITS BETTER LOVED AND LOST, THAN NEVER BEEN LOVED AT ALL" u are right this is really true.. i love it! well this poems was so gread u've done a very inspiring poem just keep it up and keep on writing and share som readers.. sometime thru writing in here it helps us to prevents some of our depression.. so god bless and hope u will be fine! thanks |
I thought it was very well written as well. While I was reading it, it keptme interested all the way through it, and made me tingle all over, it is very emotional and sweet. Keep on writing. =) I hope you feel better. |
by Corruption
This is good i see you havent lost your touch on writing good job it is cool how you compare things to other things good job |
by Impulse
Very well written =)... I'm genuinely touched by that poem and kind of can relate to it from experience =)... it is right... you learn what love is, wisdom... all that stuff... Bravo =) |
That was great i relate real well it was touching and you can feel the sadness |
by Michelle18
Wow! i love this poem alot!....very well written and i enjoyed reading it..... |
Wow! I loved this poem. Truely loved it, I think it is one of my favorites. In reality thats the way everyone should view something that has ended. Where they have gained something not lost it. You did an amaizng job!!! Wow! Keep up the amazing work! Never stop writing! |