ME AND MY RAZOR BLADE

by jessica   Apr 11, 2007


As i sit here with my razor blade
i look around and say "why oh why"
is it because of the truth?
or is it because of the lie?

you told me you loved me
you told me you needed me
you told me you would hold me
you told me you would be there for me

i believed in you
and i needed you
but all this time, you were out there and you cheated me!

you hurt me
you beat me
you kicked me into the floor
then i knew i wont you no more

i trusted and held you
i loved and needed you
you thought i had kept it to myself the way you had treated me, but boy i had told the world how you was to me

id realized i didn't need you in my life
in fact i didn't need you at all
you were a part of me once before
but once never again no more

have you realized what you've done
have you notice that your for one
have you been waiting for your charge
have you been waiting for your heart

Ive been here where you left me
Ive been here waiting for you
you buried me in the yard
were Ive been all this time

those times you cried
those times you missed me
those times you talked about me
Ive been here, here waiting for you
don't forget my blood is in you!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Devon

    I like the rythnm! keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Hey, just first of all ... great poem and writting. You need to watch your stanza punctuation but great otherwise... I could really feel the emotion hidden in every lingering word ...

    fav stanza: i trusted and held you
    i loved and needed you
    you thought i had kept it to myself the way you had treated me, but boy i had told the world how you was to me

  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Hey, hows it going? I really loved this poem, it had depth and emotion which made me really enjoy it! Well penned, keep the great writting up! 5/5

    Chan
    -xx-

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    This is sad but i know how you feel gurl....