What if...

by StormXclusive   Apr 11, 2007


What if we had tried just a little harder
Showed love to each other stronger
would you still be my lover?

Supposed we had put aside our fears,
Worked on making this last for years,
Then i wouldn't have to cry these tears.

We should have not thought of the pain,
Instead we should have thought of the gain,
This would have made our love remain.

Maybe we should have just fight,
Hold on to our love with all our might,
I know we wouldn't have a sleepless night.

If we could have held on to the dreams,
It really isn't as hard as it seems,
Do you think one day the love will redeem?

What if...

What if we had tried just a little bit harder,
Showed love to each other stronger,
Would you still be my lover?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    If we could have held on to the dreams,
    It really isn't as hard as it seems,
    Do you think one day the love will redeem?
    ___

    I loved that stanza. I can relate to this poem in so many ways. Another great write, loved the flow and form it was written. Keep writing!! 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ah, lost love is always the worst! but i live by this saying "everything happens for a reason". so just remember that the next time something bad or heartbreaking happens. open up the door to your lonely heart and let new love have the chance of lighting up your life. anyway good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Absolutely wonderful poem...

    *isabel*