Absolutely wonderful poem...

*isabel*

Ah, lost love is always the worst! but i live by this saying "everything happens for a reason". so just remember that the next time something bad or heartbreaking happens. open up the door to your lonely heart and let new love have the chance of lighting up your life. anyway good poem.

If we could have held on to the dreams,
It really isn't as hard as it seems,
Do you think one day the love will redeem?
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I loved that stanza. I can relate to this poem in so many ways. Another great write, loved the flow and form it was written. Keep writing!! 5/5

` Liz =]