You'll Begin Where I End

Great poem. Sad but an enjoyable write. I got confused a bit but I read it again and I understand it now. This was a different style than in the others poems I have read of yours. I think I like the other style better but this was good too, just not as good. But nevertheless I still give you a 5/5 for this.

Loved this poem it compleatly contridicts what I wrote in my last comment to you as it is not written in your usall style I still however love this poem and the lat line I feel is just amazing At the finish says 'You'll begin where i end' 5/5

Haha, I love the wee side note you had at the end there; it made me laugh.

The emotion was clear and you put across a strong message.

"All residents were talking [about] that event" - I suggest putting in 'about' in this sentence.

And watch out for lowercase I's - they should always be capitalised when on their own.

Good job.

Great poem! Your work is very inspirational. Check out some of mine if you can. I give this a 5/5 Keep it up!

Good poem, I like it how you make one think first then as you keep reading it becomes obivious of what the concept is! I loved it!!!
I wrote 3 new poems check all or one out if you wouldn't mind please?! Keep writing I'm feeling it!!!:) 5/5