Wonderfully written.
Nice flow and sence of feeling and emotion.
Outstanding.
5/5

Great job! 5/5
Full of emotion, I love it!
Keep up the great work!
Take care

~Kitten.

Very emotional and words. I like your style its kinda odd at first to read but I have re read it a few times and I like it more each time. Good job and keep up the good work :)

I had to read this poem over a second time because the style was unique, and thats a good thing. This poem was so sad and filled with so much pain, just like love often is. great work 5/5

Another great poem. Keep up the work. I would suggest try and keep your stanza's the same sylabbles close as possible. Thank you for commenting and rating my poem! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

Comment #3

I found that as quite a chilling poem.. i actually got a few shivers up my spine.
You write with an almost fluid motion which makes reading your work enjoyable and this one was no exception..
An amazing piece..
5/5
*Gem*

(Thanks for commenting my fiance's poem, i know he'll be pleased =)

A very intence tale you told, and another VERY unique write (you have no idea how awesome it is to read poems with topics not cliche) Again I think the rhyming held back your true emotions. The rhymes seemed a bit forced.

"All residents talking that event"
^^I think 'about' should be in there

I LOVED the last stanza in your poem. It was the perfect ending to such a chilling topic.

Chills chills chills that is all i have to say

amazing

brittany (MD)

Very nice, and I'll be sure to view your other poems as well.

Aww this was so sad! i liked your choice of words here, and the rhyme scheme was fluent. the story was sweet too. keep it up!
nuff luv

Good poem, I like it how you make one think first then as you keep reading it becomes obivious of what the concept is! I loved it!!!
I wrote 3 new poems check all or one out if you wouldn't mind please?! Keep writing I'm feeling it!!!:) 5/5

Great poem! Your work is very inspirational. Check out some of mine if you can. I give this a 5/5 Keep it up!

Haha, I love the wee side note you had at the end there; it made me laugh.

The emotion was clear and you put across a strong message.

"All residents were talking [about] that event" - I suggest putting in 'about' in this sentence.

And watch out for lowercase I's - they should always be capitalised when on their own.

Good job.

Loved this poem it compleatly contridicts what I wrote in my last comment to you as it is not written in your usall style I still however love this poem and the lat line I feel is just amazing At the finish says 'You'll begin where i end' 5/5

Great poem. Sad but an enjoyable write. I got confused a bit but I read it again and I understand it now. This was a different style than in the others poems I have read of yours. I think I like the other style better but this was good too, just not as good. But nevertheless I still give you a 5/5 for this.