Here is another good read, I really enjoyed it. The flow and rhyme were excellent and it was organized nicely. *5/5*

Alyson

This is a wonderful read, you can surely construct a well-written stanza! Amazing vocab, gorgeous imagery... just fabulous all around. :)

Congrats on winning Rachel's title contest! I really enjoyed this one from you...and as co-judge selected your's first place hands down! Clever and well constructed...the flow, rhyming and rhythm are flawless. I love the contrasts of beauty and death that reside throughout the stanzas.

We coat each petal in demise,
Then paint it bloody red,
Add a thorn to the touch,
And from here this pain has spread,

wonderful imagery! nice job! 5/5 Debbie

I feel that are very good in expressing ideas and articulating your thoughts which is hard to do. This is a piece where your poetry really shines i can understand your metaphors because they are so expressive and imaginative well done hun :D

xxx alex xxx