Comments : Wake

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    How can this not have comments yet?

    It's a very inspiring piece and gives you something to think about. After a brief stint in hospital myself, i can understand the feeling of hopelessness and confinement.
    You hit the nail on the head with this poem
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This poem was so good, I loved reading it. It flows nicely and the rhyming was good. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    This is a wonderfully inspirational poem. Your flow and beat is a bit off at some points, but your passion is wonderful. Great job. :)