by Jenni Marie Apr 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Staring out to sea |
This is a very sad poem but good. The flow was excellent and the rhyming wasn't forced. |
I was all ready for one of your mushy love poems but I read this. Even though it was a bit sad, it was beautifully written. |
by Kim
This was so sad and beautiful, a wonderfully heartfelt and provoking piece of writing! Great job! |
by Sherry Lynn
The pains of losing someone you love is the most excruciating experience that you can survive. |
by Gem
This tale is so sad, yet almost beautiful.. the ending was breath taking and something so heartfelt.. |