This tale is so sad, yet almost beautiful.. the ending was breath taking and something so heartfelt..
Well done on this one m'dear! Love it
5/5
*Gem*

The pains of losing someone you love is the most excruciating experience that you can survive.

The despair and sorrow are conveyed tactfully and with passion. Portraying such emotion to the reader can be rather difficult. You did wonderful.

--Sher

This was so sad and beautiful, a wonderfully heartfelt and provoking piece of writing! Great job!

I was all ready for one of your mushy love poems but I read this. Even though it was a bit sad, it was beautifully written.
Great poem.

This is a very sad poem but good. The flow was excellent and the rhyming wasn't forced.
You are a very talented writer.
Keep it up 5/5

|Sarah|