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I wrote this poem when I was very sad and lonely.
I hope you can relate and perhaps feel something of this

Interesting write, I have to say that your wording was very nice. I liked how you portrayed the cruelties of people in the world, but also about having a broken heart. You seemed to fit many different topics and hardships into one. Not an easy task, but yours seemed to thread off from eachother nicely. this line threw the poem off a bit though

Your heart is a breaking,
The stones hit hard,
Swallow them one by one,
And the mirror is a shard,

^^^ I'm not sure if it was the flow of that, or what it was but it threw me off a bit. Well done write, 5/5

I enjoyed this piece. It was good.
The Angel of Secrets

Wow.It was really good i enjoyed reading it keep up the good work!