My Mother.

Nice poem. very well written and i liked it all the way until you got to the last stanza which i thought was quite confusing.

My mother who knows love,
and when push comes to shove,
she shows me what inside,
and I no longer have to hide,
as I find what I'm made of.

for the third line, i think you meant to write "what's" instead of "what".

even though i thought the flow was good, it got me a little confused. besides that, the poem was great. i give it a 5/5 and keep up the good work.

This is a great and heartfelt poem, is it true? If not, you did a wonderful job of making it seem so. A few of the lines didn't make a ton of sense, but you had a nice rhyme scheme, so 5/5.

Except for the first stanza, you had very nice flow.
I must say, I'm sorry, but I don't FEEL your poems. To me, they are only words... Put your emotion into it, darling.

Nice story, also.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Hey, very well written, looks very preciese and professional, but your use of vocabulary doesnt seem very outside the box, like you just wanted simple rhymes. i can also relate twards my mother.