Hey, very well written, looks very preciese and professional, but your use of vocabulary doesnt seem very outside the box, like you just wanted simple rhymes. i can also relate twards my mother.

Except for the first stanza, you had very nice flow.
I must say, I'm sorry, but I don't FEEL your poems. To me, they are only words... Put your emotion into it, darling.

Nice story, also.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

This is a great and heartfelt poem, is it true? If not, you did a wonderful job of making it seem so. A few of the lines didn't make a ton of sense, but you had a nice rhyme scheme, so 5/5.

Nice poem. very well written and i liked it all the way until you got to the last stanza which i thought was quite confusing.

My mother who knows love,
and when push comes to shove,
she shows me what inside,
and I no longer have to hide,
as I find what I'm made of.

for the third line, i think you meant to write "what's" instead of "what".

even though i thought the flow was good, it got me a little confused. besides that, the poem was great. i give it a 5/5 and keep up the good work.