Also well written, i like this, other than the idea of making some one love you, to me it makes me feel as if it would be taking all the fun, desire,romance out of love. just my oppinion though.

Aww this is so sweet but hun, you should never change yourself for no-one, you're either accepted as you are or, you don't need them :D thats what i believe..lol
lotsa luv xx

Out of all the poems I've read by you so far, this is my favorite, simply because I relate to it on such an intimate level. You did a great job of depicting a hard relationship and it shows what a beautiful heart you have. Excellent job, 5/5

~jas~

Oh my god. This poem is exactly what I'm going through right now. I've changed a lot to be with the guy I am with now. Its almost creepy how accurate this poem about my life. You are amazing. Absolutely amazing!