Awh. This is really good. I love it. Your emotions and feelings can be felt through-out this poem. It's very sweet and nicely written.

Good poeming Enjoyed it alot

WiLd Rose

Please comment on mine

This was soo great!! i loved it, and you are an amazing writer...greatt jobb

Great way to express your feelings, nice flow. Keep it up.

Omg.. such a beautiful poem Silence! I love this one, you used a lot of detail in it.. didn't leave the reader hanging or confused. Your choice of words are wonderful and so passionate, great job girl!! 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~