The girl

Awhh this is sad:[ i gave it a 4/5 because it kind of just stopped the poem without really giving it an ending..you know? but it was still wonderfully written and i like how it rhymed.

Amazing poem. So much emotion put into this poem. The flow was great!!!!!! you did a wonderful job on writing this poem. Well done 5/5

~Chelsea

Another great one, yet it is so sad... you you have wrote the emotion greatly.........
keep up the great work, another 5/5 from me.

I feel as if I am reliving my life here, or reading it that is.. Everything you write in your poetry is my life! It is nice to know that others go and have gone through the things that I have. =) 5/5

I think the poem wouldve been stronger if you took one point and stuck to it.
The whole poem wahad to much in it.

"I don't want to be another statistic,
I no longer want to cry."

The ending was my favourite part but i could see the poem being really good if you took one of your ideas and exhausted it.

Flow was good but the whole poem all together wasn't my cup of tea.

3/5