A single tear, a black rose and a last goodbye

by isabel   Apr 11, 2007


You became the thorns of the rose that is my life
Your indifference cuts my heart like if it was a knife
You were everything for me, an angel in the night sky
You don't care, don't let me breathe, just make me cry

I can still remember the way you took my hand
I'd follow you forever, you always command
You couldn't help it, your frozen heart won't let you smile
You haunt me everyday, won't you be gone for a while?

Ghost of love behind my shoulders, took me my last word
I was left alone, weeping in this sad, broken world
Nothing's left for me, only your ghost and your lie
A single tear, a black rose and a last goodbye

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  • 17 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    This line:
    I'd follow you forever, you always command

    Should, you always, be, your always? Im just checking. Thank you for commenting on my poems. I appreciate it a lot.

  • 17 years ago

    by StormXclusive

    Very nice poem, lovely write, good choice of words,i feel your hurt and i can relatae to this piece of work. keep in touch.

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