by GoRgEoUs TONI Apr 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
love is
He was her first real crush, and first real dude |
Interesting, confusing you kind of lost me... but the start was good :) i would say 4/5, its good work but not quite excellent. |
by Mezmeryz
I liked this poem, it was quite confusing but, i liked the words you used and most sentences were really well put together, gd work hun! i dont unerstnad the low rating, but from me its 5/5! |