You have her now!

by ShadowedPhoenix   Apr 11, 2007


Falling...
My heart shatters as it hits the floor
Pieces everywhere.
All over the place,
And you just graciously glide over them
As if you cannot see my agony.
What hurts more though
Is that you moved your hand away
as my heart fell from my chest!
You watched it momentarily suspended in mid-air
and then turned away.
You looking at the tears,
Dropping out of my eyes and still nothing,
Except maybe a sick sadistic smile.

WAIT...
You're about to stand on a fragile piece.
But you seem unphased
As you slowly compress and shatter it.
I'm bleeding all over the floor now,
A beautiful flowing crimson.
Yet it doesn't even grab your attention.
Look at me!!!!!
I'm Fcking dying right in front of you!
Are you that self involved that you cannot see?
Help me!
You are meant to fix me,
Yet you don't even try, this is your fault!
Although you probably don't care.
You have HER now!!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    **But you seem unphased
    As you slowly compress and shatter it.**
    i loved that part the best. As if the person just didnt have a heart at all. and the -slowly- gives of a sensation of the other wanting to hurt.
    your writing gives off so many images. while reading, we can just imagine the whole thing.
    the end is full of emotion, anger, sadness, desception. All mixed. you really gave off the emotion you wanted to .

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    Hi Shadow! I see that your still writing your magnificent poems. This poem was great and sad. I see one mistake though in the line when you say:

    You watched it momentarily suspended in mid-air
    and the turned away.

    The line was great, you just need to add an N to The to make it Then. Other then that it was perfect. I love your writing and I apologize for missing so much of it. Things have been kind of chaotic in my life lately. Keep up the wonderful work hun.

    Love
    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Fantastic poem...

    *isabel*

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