by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup Apr 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
This was wriiten for a class i am taking in school, |
by Benny Boi
WOW... i really feel this one aye... loss blows, but you get on with life. Im sorry to hear you lost someone dear to you though... good write never the less |
Nice ryhming, i really like it. |
by Marc Ortiz
Uhm I like the way you rhyme some stanza :) this is so sweet I like it! it flowed well! so.. I'll give it a 5/5! :) good job! |
by Espoirfailed
Ithe only thing bad i noticed was the annoying things that replace apostrophes on this site, if u want it to be perfect n all... anyway amazing poem,you express how you feel with such clarity and i love the sincerity behind your well penned words. |
Nice i rally liked this one |