Eclipse

by Marc Ortiz   Apr 11, 2007


Standing at the top of the huge building
I can see the raw sight surrounding it
Filthy wind slowly slaughtering my soul
I looked up the clouds. Couldn't see any light

The sun cannot be seen in the shadows
Oh sweet memories swirl in the darkness
Angel of mine why leave me all alone
Our love is like fire-water rapid twine

The heart that has truly love never fades
Distance and time cannot shatter true love
My dreams broken, scattered into pieces
She's my wife in my blissful delusion

I promise to you I'll come back someday
Here craving for your love my only one
You made my life worthwhile to live onward
I hope you can see how much you mean to me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Artistic Fallen Angel

    I loved how you used symbolism ! I dont use alot but i love it in poems! anyway great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautifully wrote poem. Third stanza is my favorite, really amazingly written. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Another nice poem from u...lol hun...u sure r doing a great job!...Making it free verse gives this write it's own beauty!..and the poem flowed well too..kp it up..
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great job thanks for the comment on my poem "Torment" the my blissful delusion line is my favorite also

  • 17 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    I like "The Departed" better, but this one has awesome word use. I really like "my blissful delusion", especially. Great job.

    [tragic]

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