Very good poem I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and comment on my poems and I'll return the favour.

Awesome poem i dont know what to say this was just awesome so well good job!!

keenan

Great flow nice job keep up the good work

Beautifully written poem and good flow

well done

BlAcK RoSe

Please comment and vote on mine

Your structured poems a very well written. The free verse style is one of my favourite kind of poems, it's sort of hard rhyming all the time.

I liked the symbolism of the title in this poem. Very effective.

I like "The Departed" better, but this one has awesome word use. I really like "my blissful delusion", especially. Great job.

[tragic]

Great job thanks for the comment on my poem "Torment" the my blissful delusion line is my favorite also

Another nice poem from u...lol hun...u sure r doing a great job!...Making it free verse gives this write it's own beauty!..and the poem flowed well too..kp it up..
xxPoojaxx

Beautifully wrote poem. Third stanza is my favorite, really amazingly written. 5/5

I loved how you used symbolism ! I dont use alot but i love it in poems! anyway great poem!