by Bogie Apr 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Do you ever pick up the phone |
by Darien
I really liked this poem, and I thought the rhymes to be very creative. It's really hard to ryhme the same sounding words in one verse, but you did it well! The flow and rythym in this poem were great!! A very sweet poem as well. |
by Cindy
Great job on this piece. |