Comments : Staring Into Space

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "They will laugh to see your struggle
    They will laugh to see you fail.
    They glare at you with cold eyes,"

    These 3 lines really stood out to me in the poem. People seem to get some sort of entertainment out of others peoples pain and struggle. Sometimes it happens unintentially though. Really enjoyed reading this poem and I'd love to read the finished product.

    Take Care,
    Bonnie
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