Am free

by BlAcK RoSe   Apr 11, 2007


Am running away from you.
I'm breaking free.
All you did was steal the life from me.
You tryed to kill my dreams.
But i wouldn't let you break me down.

I know you won't let me go.
All you gave me was words.
Just words.
I gave you everything.
I loved you.
You used that against me.

Nothing was good enough for you.
I don't want to even look at you anymore.

Your out of my life

Goodbye

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    Good job, a lot of emotion, you write from the heart and possibly experience. Don't let your emotions get in the way of your writting though...write through anything you are feeling. Great poem and thank you for the kind words on my poems as well.

  • 17 years ago

    by April McLaren

    You are strong you can make it trust me it will get better and great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Nice poem, really good work. I loved the flow and the unique style, keep it up, and thanks for commenting on my poems.

    Wallace
    Best wishes

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    Firstly thank for your comment on mine ,its easier said then done to wlak away ,he as never hit me ,but he controls me ,not allowing me to have friends ,and never going out.I am going to continue reading some more of your work ,so far what I have read is very good ,you are a very talented writer.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chemically Corrupted

    I like it. Break away from that Bastard.

    ---Vampire

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