I like it. Break away from that Bastard.

---Vampire

Firstly thank for your comment on mine ,its easier said then done to wlak away ,he as never hit me ,but he controls me ,not allowing me to have friends ,and never going out.I am going to continue reading some more of your work ,so far what I have read is very good ,you are a very talented writer.

Nice poem, really good work. I loved the flow and the unique style, keep it up, and thanks for commenting on my poems.

Wallace
Best wishes

You are strong you can make it trust me it will get better and great poem

Good job, a lot of emotion, you write from the heart and possibly experience. Don't let your emotions get in the way of your writting though...write through anything you are feeling. Great poem and thank you for the kind words on my poems as well.