Good poem. The flow was excellent. And the word choice was good.
Keep it up 5/5

:Sarah:

Loved the flow and word choices very nicely done and written.

I liked the how in each stanza you used 'inside' as the last word of the first line.

Good flow, once again. this poem is very vivid when i see it in my head. good work.

I like your work. Use of words and rhyme are very good. I think if you work on your cadence it could be outstanding. I gave you a 5 because I think this poem speaks very well emotionally.

Wow that was an amazing poem. i have felt this way so many times in my life. its very good.