Good, but it seemed you added a few more than needed about the diameter of the tornado and things like that. But, overall a great poem, it really explains what is happening in the story.

Sincerely,

Elizabetta

I loved it! It was awesome, even thought I have already read this before. (Over the phone with you ) but oh well. Great wording, and good word structure as well. Keep this awesomeness up. 5/5