Lots of emotion, great flow except in the two stanzas the last lines in both the stanzas were a little off, they didnt quite flow with the rest of the poem. But it was a good poem. 4/5

I found the flow hard to read.
It didn't just flow naturally it was like reading a story you know?

It could be improved in many places just to help the reader.
I liked the ending because it was sudden and left you thinking.

But over all I'd give the poem a 3 because it was hard to read and that put me off it.

Another very good write, I like the fact that your poems are about life situations much like mine. I find poems that we can relate to are far better to read and understand. Amazing job again 5/5

Well written good job! well they're right its very emotional! :) keep up the good work :)

Very powerful, get's people thinking..I can relate to this poem alot. Something I wouldn't wish on my worst enemy. It isn't easy to overcome, if overcomed at all. Keep up the good work, if you need to talk, feel free to email me. =) *Hugs* 5/5
-Ally

This is actually a great example of PTSD...you did an excellent job portraying it....bravo. 5/5 again, you have real talent. glad to see you are using it.

Awhh this is sad:[ but i really enjoyed reading it cus it was wonderfully written.i gave it a 4/5 thought because it didnt really flow well in some parts but overall great job!

I thought this was a great poem and even though this hasnt happened to me i can slightly understand from things ive gone though, great poem 5/5

Ahh.
It was a bit confusing at first
Until I read the bottom.
Well done :]
5/5

Very nice poem ,touching and deep , love it

I have to make them stop somehow
Before someone gets hurt.
The last time that this happened..
...a life I almost took... , it brings back so many bad memories ,but I have to deal with that as I go ,,,,thanks for sharing,,,Tracy

5/5

Well I am sure alot of people can relate to this it is a good poem

Ok. now i am ready to ad you in my favourites. becoz i loved your poem and i am falling in love wiht your work 5/5

Wow... this is strong. a great amount of emotion being emitted out of this one. i like it alot. and i can't even imagine what it must be like to go through that. great job at capturing such a tramatic thing and turning it into an amazing poem. great job

I like this, it's very powerful in the language you use, the imagery is really powerful as well. Good Job
DnB