Its pretty good so far. keep it up.

This is a unique, original poem, which i loved. as soon as i had finished i had to read it again. well done, this is a masterpiece. thanks for the comment.

Great poem!!..nice work keep it up!!
hope ro read more like it
breex

Yeah it's hard when you have a word going on with yourself. You never win if you are not happy with the decision you made. Great poem. 5/5
-vino

Oh yeah is that suppose to be field in the last stanza?

Great poem. it remind s me of how i feel right now because my dads over in iraq

This is a sad poem its beautiful tho! Im starting to write poems again after 2 years... I've already posted one i'd like u to read it.

Loved it in all of its entirenty

Hope i spelled it right;)