It's Not Over

I enjoyed this, the opening had me hooked and each stanza was better than the last.
My favourite part was the last stanza, I thought it had a lot of impact.

Another great poem, that s how i feel about someone, and yet i dont know if i call it OVER cause im confuse,lol.
but the whole poem was so great

I like your style. Probably because Its a bit like my own. I will continue to reading all you work, so keep them coming.
You got talent girl.

Comment #5

"Let's start over,
Because you're still in my heart.
I can't stand to lose you,
Please come back, I'm falling apart."

You had a brilliant opening. Immediantly capturing attention. And you rhymed well.
I must admit, the last few stanza's seemed sort of rushed, but i always find contest poems where you're set something hard to work with.
Overall you've done a fab job =) I hope you win =)
5/5
*Gem*

(Thank you for commenting my fiance's poem. I know he'll be pleased =)

I also like the structure and emotion shown in the poem, but the usage of emotional language is very low. 1 time use of elementery vocabulary(jerk). other than that i think its very good.