Comments : Broken

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This was an excellent poem. It had a nice flow and the rhyming was great. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Sunshine 8D

    Thats beautiful hun...keep writing!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    This is really really good