by LostLikeTearsInRain Apr 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
How come my pain |
by David
Oh again another well thought out poem. wat i loved the most was the title. |
by Sherry Lynn
This is emotional and good; however, I know from reading your other poems that you can do better. Tweak with it a little and omit some of the eceryday and overused words .... such as "but" |