I dont think it should be in this catagory (sp?) but in a way it should but yea anyways the poem was good except the long lines, that kinda threw it off a wittle bit but it was a great poem I understood it, I think I did, I'm pretty sure I did. I'm rambling right now, anyways back to the poem. I loved 5/5 keep it up buddy!

Liked the poem. great theme. keep it up.

I tried to get what you wanted to say in this poem, but I cannot really understand it. It is really nice to see the rain, the sun, and the shadows in one poem.
Nice

It belongs here and it is beautiful. I love the imagery and the flow and everything! It's so good :) 5/5