Apathy

by icarus   Apr 12, 2007


An escape from torment
empty of emotion
emotion that rends my soul
detached from strife
detached from chaos
detached from life
a welcome respite
yet worth the price?
submerged in apathy
i fade away

more or less just random thoughts. Not very poetic. I might put more time into it later.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I like it very much, it is greatly written and emotions are described incredibly.
    detached from strife
    detached from chaos
    detached from life
    ^that are my favorite lines.
    Well done this poem is short but very powerful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TalkItOutInTheRain

    Random thoughts are the best kind. Like it a lot!