by MyDevotion Apr 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Our love started from day one |
by Tammie
This is an excellent poem. The flow was great and the rhyming was really natural. I love the description in it, it creates great imagery. Well done. 5/5 |
by icarus
I'm not a fan of poetry relating to love but i agree with sarah in that that was your best stanza. I actually reread it several times. Even though I dislike the topic you still managed to leave an impression. |
Wow great poem with amazing emotion, i love it |
Good poem. The flow was exellent and the emotion was deep. |