I need you

by Infected with His Deadly Love   Apr 12, 2007


I need you
To wipe away my tears
To hold me in your arms
To get rid of my fears

I need you
To tell me everything will be ok
That everything will work out fine
To help me live another day

I need you
To catch me when I fall
To pick me up when I am down
To help me understand it all

I need you
To be in my life
For always and forever
For me to be your wife

I need you
But you don't need me
Nor did you ever
You're happy now, I see.

-For a contest

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked it! And I could definitly relate to it which was even so much better! I just loved this poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    AWwwwww. That's so sweet, but so sad.
    I couldn't find not on thing wrong.
    Flawless as can be.
    Well done!
    God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Aweh it was cute, but it was also sort of cliched with some lines..basically what I'm saying is that some of those lines are often written in a lot of love poems. But, you got your emotions through and kept to the point. Keep it up. ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    I really liked how you talked about the person's point of view and talked about two sides at the end.. and the rhymes are really great good job.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    I loved this one, especially because it reminded me a lot of my own work, its beautiful and breath taking

    amazing job

    brittany (MD)

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