Comments : Walking on the wind

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    wow amazing, I absolutely love the last stanza =) the rhyming is done very well, I like the words you used in the poem.
    great work 5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    I likedd itt
    keep up the gret worrkk!!=))))

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very nice poem! The ending was strong like you said. Well, You did a good job!. God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is really unique, I thought. We all have those people that stab us in the back, you wrote about it well. The rhyming was well written, the vocab was appropriate for the poem and made great imagery. You are great at that. 5/5

    Tammie