Ninas Bonitas

by x.Athame.x   Apr 12, 2007


Las ninas risa y grito
Ellas estan entusiasmado
No tienen el dolor
De enamorado

Enamorado no es un parte
De sus joven vidas
Las ninas no estan malos
Son buenas hijas

Me gusta la libertad
Las bonitas ninas tienen
Por me dolor en amor
Me hace muy triste

Marcas del amor vidas
Muy difficil siempre
En me opinion
Amor no es importante

Amor es solamente dolor
No es muy bueno
Amor marcas personas histericos
Y es muy frustrado

Deseo podria ser
Como esos ninas
Si, yo deseo pordria ser
Como los ninas bonitas.

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  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    So true that love is only pain-well for the most part.As for desiring to be pretty like the other girls...why?you'd have to fight over the same men haha anyways good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Ok just a few things:

    1st stanza:
    3rd line, I think you wanted to say "no tienen" because you wanted to say THEY do not have pain, instead of I do not have pain, right?

    3rd stanza:
    If you wanted to say I love the freedom, you should say "Me gusta (muchisimo) la libertidad or liberdad (i cant remember) because the phrase "yo te quiero" means I love you.

    Also, just double check your spelling with "histerico" and "pordria" (podria)

    Other than that, excellent effort, you did a good job and it has a beautiful meaning. btw, just some tips with accents and tildes:

    ñ = press ALT down and with it being pressed down type in 164
    á = ALT160
    í = ALT161
    ó = ALT162
    ú = ALT163

    :) Props!

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