I liked this poem because i could relate too it in some ways about the ending a friendship and the burning bridge.
There were a few mistakes in this poem
for example:
"She [were] the charm, and I was the luck"
Shouldnt this be:
"She [was] the charm, and I was the luck"
One thing i didnt understand was
"We shared a boyfriend" Like i didnt understand it really maybe its just me. none the less i found this poem to have a fair amount of emotion running through it. Seemed like it came from the heart. Well done ~mel