by Chris Apr 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
This is my first attempt at a real poem with stanzas and rhyming its kinda all over the place, a little like me right now. I hope you like it. |
by Men
For your first effort it was a wonderful attempt...you really did a good job keep up the work 5/5 |
by SeGrAdA
I liked the rhyming very simple but that's the beauty of it.... |
by Tempest
I like this poem, it's very good. |
I really liked it...i think that it is so ture...ttyl |
I love it, well done. So much emotion nothing wrong with the flow it worked well. keep it up 5/5 |