Tell me what it takes to have you in my arms tonight
How long must I wait to make sure everything's alright?

I love these lines. Really, it's undescribable how much they hit me. It's like you wrote what I was asking myself inside...
good on you, you're amazing.

Great job on this 1 excellent poem

"I wish for once this wasn't such a big surprise"
That was my favourite line. This was really well written, a lot of emotion, I liked it a lot. =)

This poem was really well written and very fluent. i liked the sadness and beauty mixed as one in this poem, it is reflective of your theme.