A womans weakness is her sense of vanity.

Great poem. The title was really mgood and suited this poem very much. i liked the last stanza a lot because you ended the poem very nicely.. very well written . 5/5 keep up the great work.

The way this poem was written and the way the title was repeated almost reminded me of a certain poet's style. The only thing is I felt that you had specific message in mine and that didn't come across in all the stanzas, though they were all written well and beautifully.

~jas~

Very good poem hun, I thought it was written nicely. Love ya! 5/5

Hm. I just had to read this because of the title. Hope you don't mind. =]

Now. I loved the title, it drew me in, and the poem kept me. It's #3 on my top list of the six I've read today.

It's so true, and so said. Only one thing I disliked: the first stanza doesn't rhyme; it's deceiving, but if you ever question a rhyme, read it aloud to yourself. =]

Um. Yeah. Nice poem. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5