Love is a funny thing isnt it. It can make you feel as if you have wings, as if you can fly. I enjoyed reading this poem. Short yet so sweet. It is the greatest when people can go against all odds and come out on top.

Take Care,
Bonnie

Congrats and keep up the good poetry and i would stick by that man no matter what and who tell you you know who i am talking about

Hey,
nice poem, it short but sweet =) I enjoyed reading it, I love the end 5/5.
kisses stephanie

Great poem. The love you have shines in your words.

When the day is through
there will be your loving arms
awaiting me

I had this for 26yrs. Treasure it.
Take care Cindy

Beautiful poem. love your way with words. the love you speak of is something to treasure. :)

I usually hate love poems but this one reminded me of the old movies like Turner Classic Movies, which I enjoy. I could just picture some dramatic actress saying these lines in a sensual voice to the man of her dreams. Heck, it was more free style than anything which I usually don't like. Good job. :) I'm not sure if this is a four or a five though. I dunno...If I didn't read it and picture it the way I did, it would be lower than a five...but they I read it...I'll give it a five. :)